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Thursday 7 April 2016

The chocolate experience

  
Attempt 1: I was so happy when i walked in the room Mrs McLeod told us we were going to taste  chocolate I took my first bite of the dark black block of chocolate. It was amazing when  thrown it in my mouth well the black block of wonder.
 
Attempt 2  
I was so happy when i walked in the room Mrs McLeod told us we were going to taste  chocolate I took my first bite of the dark black block of chocolate. It was amazing when  thrown it in my mouth well the black block of wonder.
Attempt 3:
I was so happy when i walked in the room Mrs McLeod told us we were going to taste  chocolate I took my first bite of the dark black block of chocolate. It was amazing when  thrown it in my mouth well the black block of wonder.
Attempt 4:
I was so happy when i walked in the room Mrs McLeod told us we were going to taste  chocolate I took my first bite of the dark black block of chocolate. It was amazing when  thrown it in my mouth well the black block of wonder.
Attempt 5:
I was so cheerful when I walked in the room. Miss McLeod told us we were going to taste chocolate. I looked at the chocolate it appeared like a small brick then I touched it and it felt like a small hard brick. It had a delicious smell like hot chocolate. I threw the small dark brown piece of chocolate in my mouth, it tasted like coco.

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