Our new school

Today i have been writing a poem about the new school and how i feel about the new school
i feel lucky about the new school,comment for some feed back about my poem.

                               

I hear kids being really happy about their    

     brand new school.

I see excited kids saying ¨I love the new

      school I love the new school¨.

I smell the new aroma in the school it is like paint.

I touch the brand new carpet on the wall, it is
crazy that there is carpet on the wall.
The blue carpet is as blue as the deep deep sea in Antarctica.

I feel lucky to be the one of the first kids

       at this super supreme school.