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Friday 1 September 2017

complex sentences

           
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One day there was a huge house with 2000 people living farming  in it one day a men came out of volcano then all went to the huge house and all three of them got out there trumpets and first bowled the horn then sucked everyone up .

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  1. Hello Logan, my name is Anisia I am a year 6 from St.Bernadettes school. I really liked your sense of creativity. Your imagination is quite fascinating. Maybe you could look back and try to find some spots you could put some punctuations in so we don't have to waste our breath. Also have you ever seen a volcano suck up people?

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