This is a new beginning

Reasons

Elaboration

Persuasive Vocab

 

We had to write a persuasive
write to make Mr M to get us a new
uniform

This is a new beginning  

Mr Moriarty firstly new school new beginning needs a new uniform  it is out with the old and in with with the new .

We show what SHS is really is . Well i your head you are saying this is not working but… a new beginning out with the old in with the new . Because change is the rule  of life .         

A new School is a new uniform because our uniform has been at this school for a very long time and it will be nice to change. So out with the old and in with the new so we need to make this happen.Since I woke up thinking to change the uniform so do it for the school.

If we had new uniforms that mean that we won't have are unfit won't breaking so quick   like our concert uniform  

And if we had normal outfit  it is cheaper than other so that is a bonus. So let's start to get a new uniform .

          Nobody will tease you is we had a new uniform so that would work very well and not getting bullied so

wold id hurt to run and get to whatever you do to get a new uniform so just do it .

Overall i think we should change our uniform because out with the old and in with the new.